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Basic Character Information:
Name:Sosuke Amenori
Age:13
Gender:Male
Clan:None

Looks:


Sosuke Amenori bears a striking resemblance to the fabled Sasuke Uchiha. In fact, he's almost the spitting image of him, although there are a few minor differences. One, is that Sosuke's bangs are longer than the legendary Uchiha's and his hair doesn't have his counter part's signature "duck butt". The semi-long black locks come just about to the mid point of his neck. Sosuke also has a notably softer features than his iconic look alike. It was said that it was rare to see any other emotion other than indifference or anger on Sasuke Uchiha's face. This contrast greatly with Sosuke, who can usually be seen with a rather "confident" grin or worried/confused look on his face. Another feature that one can see between Sosuke and Sasuke is the vast difference in clothing. People say that Sasuke preferred to dress like a samurai of olden days during his later years, while Sosuke prefers to wear more modern clothing. The sixteen-year-old wears a tan and black nagajuban that seems to be made of a leather-ish type material and has a hood built into it. He also carries a brown, deer hide, knapsack with him that holds a variety of things he may need for his travels. Under his tan and black outfit, Sosuke wears a black, long sleeved shirt that is rather tight. It's tightness functions as a second skin and also acts as insulation to keep him warm in cold regions. The one of many things that Sasuke and Sosuke have in common, however, is the rope that they have both used as belts at one point. Moving to the measurements, Sosuke is 5'3 and weighs 132 lbs. Basically, despite the few differences, Sosuke and Sasuke look as if they could have been brothers. The boy's eyes are deep pools of black that look as if they could pierce through one's very core and through the other end. People often try to avoid looking directly into Sosuke's eyes for if they do, they feel as if they can't tear their own away from his. Because many people avoid his gaze, he feels that they don't want to face him which only worsens his self confidence and makes him even more defensive. His somewhat pale skin compliments his dark and deep pupils, which many people(mainly females) say makes him very handsome, but scary looking at the same time(Sort of like Sai, but not quite as pale). Underneath his robes, it can be seen that Sosuke has a somewhat muscular build. His muscles aren't bulky, though and make up about 15% of his body weight. For someone his age, he is surprisingly well toned. Despite these positives, none of them help Sosuke's self esteem one bit.

Personality:Sosuke is an extremely self-conscious person with a low self esteem, although he doesn't let others see this side of him. He hides his self-consciousness with a fake superiority complex and flashiness, but in the end it's nothing more than a show to keep others unaware of how he truly feels about himself. He'll act uncaring and brave in situations that he feels he can handle, but when things get thick his true colors will begin to show. The boy will begin to doubt himself, his knowledge, and his own abilities when in a clutch moment that could potentially risk the life of a comrade or his own. At times like these it will be very easy to realize his true personality even to the untrained eye. It's not like he's satisfied with how he is, however. Sosuke just about despises himself for his lack of resolve and self-worth and seeks to become better than what he is currently. Although he does try to improve, daunting questions and statements, that he tries to keep in the back of his mind, resurface and cause him to regress in his improvement. Sosuke's will to become better is stronger than these questions though, although and he is currently starting to progress with a steady pace. It is for this reason that he left Amegakure. There has got to be something he can do to help rid himself of his own self-consciousness and Konohagakure just may be the place to help. Now besides the self esteem issues, Sosuke is a pretty decent fellow. He's very generous and kind, but one wouldn't think so even when he's showing kindness. The boy will pretend to help out of pity to keep the rouse of his superiority complex up. He'll say things like: "You're too weak to defend yourself, so I guess I'll have to help" and "Stay out of this fight. It won't be on my hands if you die" and many people will believe that he truly is helping out of obligation and not out of how he truly feels. The boy feels he needs to help others to atone for not being able to help the one person who protected him when he was small. The scientist who fled the village along with him was killed by the Hunter-nin and Sosuke wasn't helpful in the least. All he could do was run away and worry about himself. To be honest, the boy would rather take his own life than to ignore a call for help.

Skill and Rank Information
Village:From Amegakure; Currently in Konohagakure

Rank:Genin

Special Characteristics:Shikaku no Senshu Kindachi(Vision of Tyrant Kings) a.k.a Boutoku(Blasphemy)
Description:Boutoku is a Doujutsu technique that enables the wielder soverignty over Gravity and Repeling/Attraction Forces. By focusing their mind and their Chakra, the wielder can repel attacks and affect the Gravity and unseen forces in a given area. Needless to say that this requires a large amount of Chakra and thus the wielder of these eyes have naturally larger Chakra Reserves than most. The power of these eyes relies completely on the user's mental state and their train of thought/focus. A truely experienced user can use the power of Boutoku to it's fullest extent and would be able to pull off advanced technique with this eye even if something as loud as a Freight train were going by beside them. This Doujutsu has a specified range, but generally lower ranked users can only repel/alter the area or things that are about a few feet away from them whilst a more advanced Shinobi with the Boutoku can affect areas larger than two Football fields combined. Whiel the positives are very clear, there are noticable drawbacks as well. For one, there is a time interval after the user has used Boutoku in which he can't use it again. To put it simply, It can't be used in succession. Lower level Shinobi will usually have a interval of 25 seconds, while higher level Shinobi will have an interval of about 5 seconds. An image of the Boutoku is below.

Spoiler:

Elements:Fuuton(Wind) -Has not discovered second Element-

Skills Specialties:Ninjutsu and Taijutsu

Jutsu
(Academy Techniques:Bunshin, Kawarimi, Henge, Shunshin, etc.)

Boutoku Jutsu

Name:Kindachi no Songen (King's Majesty)
Rank:D (At Sosuke's current level. Subject to change as he grows.)
Element:None
Description:This Doujutsu technique is used by Boutoku users. This ability allows the user to manipulate external objects through an invisible force that emanates from the center of his body. This force can both repel and attract objects and elemental ninjutsu, allowing him to draw in opponents or deflect any attacks that are launched against him 360 degrees around. The force requires a short interval to recharge(25 seconds for novices and 5 for experts). When used by novice Boutoku users, they cannot repel Jutsu, but only weapons and other Shinobi. As they train with Boutoku more they will learn to do it, however. This is the simplist technique of Boutoku.

Name:Kindachi no Touji (King's Reign)
Rank:D (At Sosuke's current level. Subject to change as he grows.)
Element:None
Description:This is a Doujutsu technique is utilizes by Boutoku users. Kindachi Touji enables the user to manipulate the Gravity in a given area making hard for things to move around. He can increase the Gravity and make it so that it is very hard to move around or he can decrease it and make things float about in the air. Either way, the opposition is going to find it very hard to dodge incoming attacks. Novices can only sustain for 3 minutes(3 post) while experienced users can sustain it for 6 minutes(6 post).

Wind Jutsu

Name:Hayabusa Shuriken (Peregrine Falcon Shuriken)
Rank:C
Element:Wind
Description:Fuuton • Hayabusa Shuriken is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes the Wind Element. To use this technique, the user must have an ample amount of Shuriken. To begin, the user will embue their Shuriken with Wind Chakra and then hurl them at the opposition. After the appropriate hand seals, the Chakra will surround the Shuriken and take the form of a Peregrine Falcon. However, they aren't called Peregrine Falcon Shuriken becuase of their looks. Although it is not as fast as it's real life counterpart, the Hayabusa Shuriken is very fast, being able to move up to 75mph. Because his Chakra is embedded inside the Shuriken, the user can control where they go and their movements. Also, Because of the cutting properties of Wind Chakra, the Chakra Peregrine Falcon gains them too. They can cut through solid stone without a problem. Another thing to note is when the Chakra Peregrine Falcon disspitates, the Shuriken inside it will still progress towards the foe.

Name:Dai Hayabusa Shuriken (Great Peregrine Falcon Shuriken)
Rank:C
Element:Wind
Description:Fuuton • Dai Hayabusa Shuriken is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. This technique is closely related to the Hayabusa Shuriken technique. The only difference is that instead of using regular Shuriken, the user uses Giant Shuriken that they will probably summon from a scroll. The size of the Peregrine Falcon formed is substantially larger then that of a normal one. It is large enough for the user to ride on it. It has the same abilities as the regular Hayabusa Shuriken technique, but with much more damaging results.

Name:Daitoppa(Great Breakthrough)
Rank:C
Element:Wind
Description:Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, the Shinobi will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. The force of this blast is so large that it can redirect weapons, Jutsu, etc back towards the foe.

Other Jutsu

Name:Kage Shuriken(Shadow Shuriken)
Rank:D
Element:None
Description:Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Shuriken. When throwing the Shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

Name:Kai(Release)
Rank:D
Element:None
Description:Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

History and RP Sample
History:
Creation/Academy Arc:
Deep in the confines of a research facility in the Hidden Rain village on a dreary October 8th, Sosuke Amenori was brought into this world. His mother or rather, the women who was kidnapped and implanted with him, died due to labor conditions. His fathers were disposed of as soon as they had given their necessary contribution to his creation. The scientist that made all of this possible had no particular interest in the parents but only what they bore....Sosuke. The researchers wanted the ultimate shinobi for the village and kidnapping ninja from the likes of Hoshigakure, Sunagakure, Kumogakure, and Konohagakure seemed like a logical way to begin their experiment. Due to the current war, taking a few hostages was not such a big surprise to most countries and they had so much more to deal with, that they didn't bother sending retrieval squads. Sosuke grew up rather quickly and learned even more quickly. He had basic Genin level techniques down by the time he had entered the Academy at age 8, much to the astonishment of the other teachers and students. All the staff found it odd that a boy, with whom they had very little records of, had such talent. It wasn't long before one of the teachers confronted the Village head about the matter. It was decided to question the scientist who had been "raising" the boy all this time and have a talk about such illegal activities that may have conspired. Coincidentally, the scientist got wind of this first and decided to dispose of the evidence..namely, Sosuke. The man tried with every fiber of his being to kill the boy, but he had to admit that he had grown somewhat attached to him over the years. The scientist fled the village, taking Sosuke with him with the Ame Hunter-nin hot on their trail.

Missing Nin/Konohagakure Arc:
The pair fled all over the great shinobi nations for about 5 years trying escape their pursuers, but the scientist realized that his efforts were futile and one day decided to confront the Hunter-nin from their home village. Sosuke was now thirteen years old and had become considerably stronger but he wasn't above crying when the man said that they were speaking for the final time. He gave the dark haired boy a bag full of scrolls they he wanted him to read later and with a teary good bye, Sosuke left the man to his fate with the Hunter nin. The thirteen year old child was all alone now and soon his despair turned into bitterness and his bitterness eventually turned into self-consciousness. He kept the all the emotions that he was so confused about bottled inside and tryed to take his mind off of it all by reading the scrolls the scientist gave him. In the scrolls was a good number of Wind Jutsu and some sort of Boutoku Jutsu that were detailed down to the last sentence. Above the jutsu was the writing of the scientist. They read:"Let the caring hands of God guide you." After he had finished reading the Jutsu he turned to another scroll. On it was his history. Upon finding out that he was some sort of test for the damn village that was now hunting him, his feelings spiraled out of control. His self esteem hit an all time low as he wandered around from Village to Village. Eventually the boy was found by a group of Shinobi from Konohagakure who were coming back from a mission. It had been about a week and the boy was nearly starved. Long story short; they took him back to Konoha and intergrated him into the village. His self esteem is still suffering, but he is getting better steadily.


Rp Sample:(Most of you know how I RP. Its short for the sake of space and time.)
The faint light given off by the full moon made strange and eerie shadows along the dunes and cacti of what seemed to be and endless white desert. The dark figures gnarled and squirmed as if they were about to spring to life. In one of the shadows of the larger cati sat a young boy with his hood up, protecting himself from the bits of sand and other debris that could possibly get in his eye and hinder his vision. Not to mention that having mostly black made him blend in with the shadows, keeping him safe from predators and attackers. Not that he was worried or scared. He just didn't feel like dealing with anything right now. As the sun began to emerge from it's hiding spot on the other side of the earth, the boy rose as well. "Time to head out once more." He told himself as he crossed the deserts of Sunagakure no Sato. If he wanted to make it to Konohagakure within the next few days then he had to hustle and make superb time. No brakes. No stopping. Nothing. As the sun illuminated the boy's face that was still covered by his hood, one could see a look of determination in his pupils.

-Bumps-

Before i get started, i wanna start with the Hammer first.

-Absorbing all Raiton-based techniques is a little OP for my taste. Cause if thousands upon millions of bolts of lightning come at you, it's kind near impossible to dodge or deflect that much power... Put a limit on it, say near maybe A or B...no higher. Cause S is damn powerful. xD

-I'll say something else later.

Mkay, I can see that I guess. I just hope that nobody can actually hurl millions of lightning bolts at me, 'cuz that would be like OMGWTFBBQ Op. xD

Next~

I see a problem, your Poison, chakra network isn't in the normal body its a spiritual thing, you can't inhale something and have it go to your spirit form, try something else, like maybe poison needles that can drain or something. Sorry. =/

chuunin can't have ANY A ranks.

Gasoline...? Que? i dont think so.

No A ranks: Coolio~
Gasoline: B-but Jiraiya could spit Oil
Poison: The poison is a spiritual thing itself since it's a production of Sosuke's own chakra and his normal body. Tis a poison Chakra/body made gas that destroys Chakra Coils. If it's easier, I can say that he embues his own Chakra into the gas.

Sounds like Shizune's technique, however her's actually affected organ's and such. A poison that can affect someone's chakra, eh...sorry dude Remove or change.


'Inoriame no Jutsu(Prayer for Rain)' - Yeah no. 1. That's way over C ranked and 2. I don't like the whole idea of your character controling natural lightning from the sky. Plus it's Sasuke's original technique and it's S ranked. Smells like teen Overpowered-ness.

'Kihatsusei Touza no Jutsu(Volatile Current)'- I want you to know just how vunerable you will be with this against wind attacks. 1 attack and your character would probably die.

'Enten Touza no Jutsu(Spherical Current)' Electricty isn't 'stored' in your body.


I'd rather you take out the two Cannon Raikou techniques. I might be mistaken but I remember those being in the fillers and unless you stole it before that dude died, then it has to be removed.

How about now?

The only thing I have a problem with is
'Hayabusa Shuriken (Peregrine Falcon Shuriken)'-
Sounds more like a B-ranked to me and Genin can't start out with B ranked. Please reduce it's abilities or remove it then I'll give my approval.

Severely reduced it's speed.

Alrighty then, Approved