creation kaguya [Needs Second Opinion] SN

((short for what it should be only nessesary stuff for me))
name: creation Kaguya
age: 19
gender: male
village: leaf
rank:jounin
clan:kaguya
looks:5'8 pitch black wings on his ankles three times the size of him. The wings seem as if they devour the very light around them. creation has pointed teeth that seem to gleam like metal. Emerald green eyes with an outline of bright grey.creation's skin is smooth as if it were lathered in oil and shines like he is constantly soaked in water.

creation wears black latex from above his wings to his neck leaving the hands free.
creation wears pitch black leather pants over this as well as a tight fitting black silk shirt that stops right were the latex stops. creation has wild white hair to
shoulder-blade length the end of the strands of hair being pointed together.

creation carries a short black katana at his left hip that shines brilliantly as if it were in fact a jewel. he has a pure white double bladed long sword((bone claymore)) that is strapped to his right shoulder. Creation has a kunai bag strapped in between his shoulder-blades

weapons:blackkatana,the common ninja gear like kunai or shuriken,and
the
bone claymore ((actually a one handed weapon))

abilities: increases the speed of dead bone pulse jutsu.
graveyard blossoms, turns the sword into hundreds of tiny blades flying through the air the user controls these at will. at chuunin
the wielder can turn the weapon into a valley of huge bone claymores increasing the number of the blades into the ten-thousands this one is called graveyard blossoms kageyoshi*cannot use the valley of swords to attack you must make it graveyard blossoms kageyoshi*
((inspired by captain kuchiki))


personality:creation is the kind of guy who rarely thinks things through. almost always with a wide grin on his face. even with all his mindless joy he'll sometimes suddenly become depressed as if he were a different person entirely. creation will usually do what floats to his head first and has a difficult time staying focused to one thing for a long time because of his ADD.

when angry ,if ever, creation acts more like his demon-half, for he lets loose a bloodcurdling screech with bloodthirsty intentions. life is kind of like one big joke to creation as if nothing was ever real to him to begin with.

special characteristics: gift of tongues,highly resistant to pain he has scars for a reason not to look cool, wings on his ankles showing demon heritage(namely incubus),can see dreams,2ft long tongue, an alchemist

elements:air,water

skills/specialties:main/ninjutsu sub:weponry


history:
before ninja arc:
being an orphan from birth he learned to rely on nature since it kept him and everyone else alive. creation
often meditated and lived around forest animal since a young age he’s had his share of friends dying so he became powerful to protect nature. one day he found the leaf village and was happy beyond words to find humans coexisting with nature he joined them to help teach everyone else to respect nature as a friend.

student arc:
creation was a reckless kid at this time. he mostly just got into fights with people some of them far stronger than he was. even though he was usually being beaten he made friends along with the humiliation so it wasn't all that bad. this also taught him faster for he learned more and more about strategic fighting with other people.

genin arc:creation was a little more cautious than his first days but was still a maniac.
one day he met a member of his own practically extinct clan that was named shikyo .narrowly avoiding death through pretending to be a coldblooded fighter he left him. creation has never seen him again though. He still fought a lot and made more friends through the violence.

chuunin arc:this is where everything started to come together.creation became more relaxed around people and even more caring. one day creation during a rest in the forest. a girl in a wheelchair was being bullied by some kids. Scaring them off creation later befriended the girl who was named sakuya even though he called her kitty-chan for she was a container for a neko (cat) demon. she even called him nii-san ((brother)) so they had obviously grown close. creation had taken up alchemy now creating a few useful concoctions and even showed sakuya some of this stuff.
ever expanding his friendship along he continued to meet more and more people and even a few missing-nin.

jounin*current* days:
creation had mounted a capture mission with ayame rikkai and ookami ukiku in the hopes of clearing ayame's.they succeeded in the end if not being bruised and battered. two of creation's friends, Rose and sakuya, have left the village for sad reasons.sakuya because she had to follow her 'father' because she believed he was right. and Rose as not to worry everyone of her impending doom in 3-4 years.
creation has met up with them though((pm RPing never got to report)) even so creation has currently been feeling a little depressed and might even go berserk if pushed the right way.


rp sample:"hugh morning already" creation muttered as beams of light entered through the windowsill with the birds chirping. Just as Creation got out of bed he noticed the room was a wreck and there were even some men and women on the floor and then he realized “this isn’t my house”. Creation then ran out of the house as fast as his legs could carry him. As soon as Creation got out of the house one of his friends said "told ya it was haunted pay up" Creation responded “no it isn’t look at it" as Creation turned around the house was gone. Dumbstruck Creation payed up for losing the bet

JUTSUS


Name: Bone Clone
Rank: B
Element: Bone
type: Ninjutsu
Description: crates an identical clone out of bone because of this they’re difficult to dispose of but only 1-2 of them can be out at one time


Name: Bone Comet
Rank: B
element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: covers the user in bone that’s spiked on the outside usually to collide like a kamikaze at a target but can be used as a full body shield

Name: skelearmor jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: (a second bone structure) bones covers the chakra system protecting it from certain attacks and can even block certain
genjutsu

Name: Skull Bone Transcendence
Rank: B
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: a fifth bone structure (must have demon bone armor in effect) the plates of bone fuse together and to the users skin as well the vibration can become so violent the user can shoot concussion waves out of the bone as well as taking away that speed decrease when in demon bone armor also the bone gets thinner and weaker

Name: Bone Rod
Rank: C
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: launches a slender piece of bone that attracts projectile ninjutsu the rod is easy to break otherwise it couldn’t attract the ninjutsu

Name: Bone Demon Armor
Rank: B
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: a fourth skeletal system must have chaos bone in effect the black bones get infused with chakra making them even stronger the exoskeleton gets surrounded with massive spires covering the entire body (the spires are the fourth skeletal system) to keep from dying the bones around the mouth are breathable , the bones around the eyes are see through, they also transfer heat out to keep from heat exhaustion the bone spires vibrate at a very fast pace ripping apart most materials.


Name: Solar Flash
Rank: D
element: Energy
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: a flash of blinding light temporary blinds the opponent
must come from the eyes. ((1-2 turns depending on how direct the line of sight was))

Name: Leaf Typhoon
Rank: C
Element: Energy
Type: Taijutsu
Description: spins upside down at unbelievable speed to bash the opponent in with a flurry of kicks


Name: Comet Of Destruction
Rank: C
Element: wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: charges a large amount of chakra to make it explode out of the users entire body if u charge someone using this it looks like a comet crashing into the earth.

Name: Bone Chaos Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: a third bone structure (you need skelearmor in place to do this) alters the users bone structure making their bones pitch black making them practically impossible to break them, conducts chakra at will, and since there light dramatically increases speed, the first bone structure becomes an exoskeleton

Name: Bone Demon Tail
Rank: C
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: grows the tail bone out to make a spiky bone tail 4ft long with the price of more chakra can make it longer but the default size is 4ft long

Name: Bone Demon Claws (could be used as an item)
Rank: C
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: bones grow out of the tips of the fingers that are 7inches long resembling claws that resembles a demon's

Name: Demon Shell Jutsu
Rank: E-B (depends on how thick you make it)
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: uses chakra to harden the skin at higher levels it looks like demon skin/can use on objects

Name: Bone Demon Jaws
Rank: C
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: doubles the size of the mouth by growing out the jaws and grows the user’s teeth to make them razor sharp and several times thicker

Name: Star shower Jutsu
Rank: D
Element: wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: fires an explosion of chakra from the palms looking like a meteor shower

Name: Leaf Hurricane
Rank: D
Element: Energy
Type: Taijutsu
Description: basically a mid-air spinning double kick

Name: Dead Bone Pulse
Rank: N/A
Type: Bloodline
Element: Bone
Description: the Kekkei Genkai of the kaguya clan it allows them to control and/or grow bones

Name: Skeletal formation: Octopus
Rank: C-A (Varying on the number of Tentacles)
Element: Bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: grows tentacles of bone out of the user’s shoulder blades. The tentacles look just like an octopus’s. The tentacles are 10 feet long the tentacle’s length can change if wanted to even after the jutsu is cast. the tentacles may grow out of the shoulder blades but they’re connected to the spine so the brain can send electrical patterns to the tentacles causing movement this is caused because creation made a nervous system made out of bone inside the tentacles unfortunately this means he can also feel pain with them as if they were his arms or legs.

C: 2 tentacles
B: 4 tentacles
A: 8 tentacles

Name: Skeletal formation: Zero Invisibility
Rank: A
Element:bone
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: creation makes his bones vibrate at a pace were he can feel all objects around him including underground or in the air. Allowing the user to sense everything and anything around them even when blind the denser the medium for the vibrations the better the range so this would be useless if say I was in the desert. (Think how toff sees in avatar)

Name: ikusen yaiba gikou (thousand blade technique)
Rank: N/A
Element: wind
Type: Fighting style
Description: Creations own fighting style. This style uses sharpened chakra
being dispersed in any sword or Taijutsu attack having many shapes and sizes.
For instance if I thrusted my finger the chakra would be the shape of a
bullet, an axe kick would be a hammer, a round house kick would be a massive
slash. This being said the chakra cost is equal to the attack so 1 punch would
be the cost of 2 this means any physical attack is twice the cost.
The chakra is only dispersed if the attack hits something solid.


Name: neutron death bomb
Rank: A
Element: wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: a large amount of chakra that is formed into a sphere about the
size of creation's palm. The chakra is held together by a shard of bone in
the center making the chakra unstable that will make the chakra explode
outwards if disturbed. When the chakra explodes outward the pull of the bone
shard will force the chakra back after the chakra has gone 10ft making an
implosion that can decimate pretty much anything in its path.

Name: demonic essence
Rank: A
Element: Energy
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: through use of massive chakra, willpower, and concentration creation temporarily becomes full-demon allowing him a number of abilities and drawbacks.
1.able to appear to what a women is most attracted to(will only work if its the form of a male)
2.sexual needs are increased
3.physical strength dramatically increased
4.able to enter and connect dreams
5.increased hormones allows more sexual attraction to the opposite sex but fogs creation's head so he cant think as well.
6. Saliva becomes a sedative that paralyzes

the new jutsu @.@
summoning jutsu:succubus
rank:S
Type:Ninjutsu
element:N/A
appearance:http://data1.blog.de/blog/w/whitewarrior/img/succubus.jpg
description:creation summons a 5'6 succubus that goes by the name of lillian.
a succubus is a demon that focuses on draining life force/chakra from men by having intercourse with them. succubi use charisma and hormonal genjutsu for this task and even have a few fuuinjutsu. they appear to be human to the naked eye though.

her jutsu include:

lustful intentions
rank:A
type:genjutsu
description:lillian will use a string of handsigns and ensare a male target in this genjutsu making their hormones run wild with lust for lillian. the feeling of lust is so strong it leaves the target practically unable to think.

Name: Shikumi no Jutsu (Death Forseeing Technique)
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This jutsu is much like the Temporary Paralysis Technique, but paralyzes the foe by showing them a vision of their own gruesome death. In addition to the paralysis, the enemy is overwhelmed with fear, and will no doubt suffer severe mental stress

devil spawning
rank:S
type:fuuinjutsu
description:during intercourse lillian will steal the seed of her partner making her pregnant.the gestation period is 3 months but what is given birth to is a demonic spawn version of the father that can use the fathers jutsu from anything B ranked or lower.

kiss of death
rank:B
type:fuuinjutsu
description:through a kiss lillian will seal the target's chakra within herself.the target unaware of that their chakra is being stolen. this goes on for aslong as lip contact stays.

tainted affection
rank:A
type:genjutsu
description: through eye contact lillian casts a genjutsu over the target that messes with their hormones causing them to fall in love with lillian.

scornful jealousy
rank:B
type:genjutsu
description:by pointing her finger lillian casts a genjutsu over a target that messes with their hormones to make them become savagly jealous,angry, or irritated with whoever they first see.

-Oh come on Creation! You can give me a better Rp sample then that! Longer deeper.....

-Other then that looks okay to me.
- History's a bit crazy but understood that still story plotting.

(OMG Kaguya creep the crap out of me... *shivers of Halloween shivers*
BTW Incubus... LMAO ROFL and So forth. Oh you'll be fun)

Want Second Admin Mod Opinion though to.

- 'Solar Flash' When you say 'Temporary' how long exactly do you mean? Please add that detail to it.

- 'Skeletal formation: Pistol step'
With this, The moment it hits the ground the impact would probably break the bones and you would need to grow new ones. As I stated before, the shape of the bone cannot be changed to a spring like shape, even if it was, the bones couldn't take the pressure.

- Please use spell check and also use the proper Puncuation and such. There is such a thing as a caps button.