Kayn Korak [Done]

Name: Kayn Korak
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Clan: Korak

Looks: Approximatly 6 ft 1 inch. Long blonde hair with a light build. He has a light tan skin. He usually wears underarmor with a light t-shirt and shorts. The necklace he wears around his neck can store chakra inside of it and was a gift from his great grandfather. (avatar)

Personality: Kayn's personality has changed over the years. As he grew his personality grew quieter but also stronger. He watched others go through difficulty and tried to help. As he did he gained wisdom and kindness. When he turned 16 he went on a mission and his team was anniahlated. When he came home he learned his parents had the same fate as his comrades. Now he strives to help people and will protect those he holds close. His anger is all but diminished and his sence of loss is gone. He will fight till his friends are safe or he is dead trying.


Kekkei Gekkei: The Korak clan has the special ability to seal jutsu away inside of weapons. They have lived in the earth village for a hundred years, their clan becoming the earth village's special elite core. When they seal the jutsu inside the weapons they can use them to increase the power of the weapon, or, use it as a suprise attack without creating handsigns. As they use their jutsu, they force a large amount of chakra pushing it. It forces it into the weapon and kind of holds it there. Afterwards they can put as much chakra as they like into the attacks. The weapon will gain power by weight and distribution of the growth and the jutsu.

Description: Kai Sealing Jutsu-The user places the selected weapons on a solid surface. He makes handsigns and starts to use the jutsu they select. They create more hand signs and the jutsu slowly dissolves in the weapon, making it able to perform. There is no limit to the jutsu they can seal, but with every jutsu al the others lose strength after 5 jutsu.

Special Effect: With their jutsu sealed they no longer have to perform handsigns to use it, instead they focus chakra to trigger the jutsu they want. It also increases the power of the weapon. It can also make for different combonations to make different uses of the jutsu performed.


Skill and Rank Information

Village: Hidden sand village

Rank:Chuunin


Special Characteristics: Kayn anaylzes the situation first, but when needed he will block out his thought and focus on the enemy. When he does this his attacks become stronger but they are also easier to dodge. But when he plans his moves they are practically unpredictable to anyone chuunin and under.
Special Effects: Kayn's attacks become more powerfull, and more unpredictable. His IQ allows him to lead his teams into dangerous situations and come back alive.

Elements:Main-Water, Sub-Fire

Skills Specialties: Main-Ninjutsu, Sub-Weapons


Jutsus:

Clone jutsu
rank-E
type-ninjutsu
This ninjutsu technique creates a clone to confuse enemy's while attacking at the same time. The clone will dissapear if made physical contact but is mainly used for defense.

Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
In this ninjutsu technique the user uses chakra to transform into someone or something else as a disguise.

Escaping skill
rank-E
type-Ninjutsu
This ninjutsu is used to get out of bindings or ropes as well as cuffs when captured or cornered. It focuses chakra to the point of the locks and slowly starts to unwind.

String reeling
rank-E
type-Taijutsu
This Taijutsu is used for Immobilizing enemy's with string wrapped around their bodies, also capable of laying traps to detonate paper bombs. The string cant be cut except by a strong push of chakra.

Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank:D
Type-Ninjutsu
This ninjutsu is the Kage Shuriken no Jutsu, creating shadow clones of the first shuriken thrown, allowing for the possibility of hundreds of shuriken.

water style-Violent Water Wave
rank-D
type-Ninjutsu
The appropriate handsigns for this ninjutsu create a large tidal wave at their opponents using water style.

Staff water blast
rank-D:style-attack and defence
type-Ninjutsu
This ninjutsu sprays a strong blast of water out an end of kayn's staff, limitless as long as the user uses more chakra.

Staff fire blast
rank-D:type-attack
type-Ninjutsu
This ninjutsu will shoot small fireballs out the end of kayn's staff, limitless as long as the user keep using more chakra.

Flare whip
rank D
type-Ninjutsu
With this ninjutsu kayn's staff increases size and inflames from chakra and using the staff fire blast jutsu.

Art of the Water Prison
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
This ninjutsu captures enemy's in an unbreakable water prison, must keep arm in the prison to hold it together, if done it is unbreakable from the inside.

Spiritualism (Summoning) Ninja Hounds
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
This ninjutsu shall summon animal user has a blood pact with. Kayn has a blood pact with his ninja hounds, able to track and attack enemy ninja through scent.

Summons:Hounds
1:tatsu-leader,Grey-Can tell when to quit with a large expance of integrity too.
2:Tulio-second in command,Brown, likes to play around but is serious in battle.
3:light star-Attack specialist,White, has the best vision during the night.
4:discover-Main tracker,Black, has the best sence of smell.
5:pen-Tracker,Black-the youngest and most eager of the group, smaller.
6:amaru-Tracker-Black,Older with more experience and insight.
7:hanari-Battle Planner,Black with 2 white stripes has a coller that stores scrolls and maps.
8:marriot-Ambush protector, Silver, Huge dog that stays back in case of an ambush.

Combonation Transformation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
This ninjutsu will transform with an object or person together into one thing.

Giant Waterfall
Rank: A
Type:Ninjutsu
Creates a giant mountain of water and flows toword the enemy falling at high speeds.

Great Fireball
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Creates a giant fire ball and shoots it through the mouth at opponents.

Shadow Shuriken Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
This ninjutsu hides one shuriken in the shadow of the first thrown.

Kai Sealing Jutsu
Rank-A
Type-Ninjutsu
This jutsu is native to the Korak clan. They can seal the jutsu they have learned into their weapons. Then use them to make the weapon, and the jutsu stronger. Every member carries a staff with them, either for their nin-jutsu or tai-jutsu.


History: Kayn grew up after the great war was over. His village was rebuilding and growing stronger. As he grew he began to develop jutsu and skill as a shinobi. He eventually enrolled in their ninja academy, scoring average with other students. But he held back in class, waiting to slide into genin. As he did so he realized he had entered a world far different than what he expected. On a mission as a convoy his squad was ambushed and anniahlated. He quickly took cover and watched helplessly as the caravan was destroyed.

After that he began his hourney home. But when he arrived he realized his parents had volunteered for a rescue mission to get him and his squad out of there. They arrived too late, they were killed while searching the wreckage. Kayn salvaged what he could and buried them near the village walls. Afterwards he went home and collapsed, he awoke 2 days later with nobody around him. After that day he focused herd, and decided to never let his comrades be hurt. He was promoted to chuunin and learned knowlage on battle tactics and skill.

That year he failed the jounin testing. But he didn't give up. The entire time he fought he studied the opponent's skills and tactics, not really fighting. So the next time he took it, he passed with flying colors. Afterwards he decided to stay jounin, but then he was called to duty. He was made anbu and was head of the so far squad. But now they were twinkling and he had to do all he could to keep the village bright.


Rp Sample: Kayn's father leaned over his bead, gently nudging him awake, "kayn wake up." Kayn's father Jerec always woke him up at six in the morning to practice jutsu. "Aw c'mon dad, cant we just start late today?". Jerec replied " if you want to be the best, you must train whenever possible." So, just as every day Kayn got up and went outside to warm up with staff sparring practice.

This was the one part of training he could defeat his father. The staff was the Korak clans speciality. Especially sparring, this was where kayn shined. Jerec came at him with a horozontal strike. Kayn easily parried and counter attacked with a blow to the legs. He may be able to beat his dad, but Jerec wasn't stupid. Jerec jumped over the strike and came down on Kayn.

Kayn wasn't ready for it, he tried to parry but Jerec rolled left and struck his side. Kayn couldnt believe he let his guard down. But he was about to try and make up for it with a move he recently learned. He started making handsigns. Jerec was confused, he had no idea his son had learned a jutsu.

As Kayn finished the handsigns he took out his staff and aimed it at his father. A look of recognition crossed his face then suprise. But he could only get out 2 words before it hit him. Kayn sent a blast of water strong enough to blow an elephant over at his father. The last thing he heard before going inside was his fathers laughter of suprise. one down, two to go kayn thought...[/u][/b]

Okay, before i get started on ANYTHING. I would really like you to use the Bold and Underlined template if you would. It's the Green letters under the template, please use that, it's really hard to figure out what's what in this application...

Sorry for double post, but now. Since everything looks fine(except maybe the jutsu), i give this Half approval.

You need another approval from another person to get this application approved. xD

Approved.

unapproved due to the missing of a lot of things and overall not done app.

I need Way more info on your KG,

Your IQ, yea you can't just have it, and its not really a special ability its more of a personality thing.

Your history is TINY like seriously.

Were not Accepting ANBU, nor Jounin, I honestly dont know why John approved this.

Your looks, uhm, all your avatar is is your face, describe your clothing, etc.

RP sample has many mistakes.

Were not accepting Rock Ninja...so once again why was this approved?

Multi-Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: A
Type:Ninjutsu
Creates many shadow clones in one jutsu.

-secret technique REMOVE IT.

Shape changing
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Can move body out of the solid human form to manuever around enemy's and obstacles.

-This is a Kekkai Genkai, so you couldn't use it.

Yeah, sorry about that, when i saw this application, i was sorta absent minded. Sorry Yun. ^^;

Lol, When I saw that Zane already gave his approval I just kinda judged it off of trusting him, so yeah it's my fault actually.

done

Before i can approve, this, i need you to do a couple things.

http://www.leafninja.com/ninjutsu.php

I need you to make the techniques like the ones here, if you would...

Zane-kun. ~

done ~.~

Some of the things i asked for aren't finished, please fix.

tell me what isin't done! omg

I have plenty of kg, my history is longer than some of approved app's. Saruno is making me anbu in his village. My looks have everything and my rp sample is fine! what the heck! i did everything on there.

why do you have Inuzuka secret techniques on your application, you have too many A ranks for Chuunin. Your Looks include an ANBU mask. describe the power increase in the weapon for your KG, I dont care about the approved apps, i care about YOUR app. Your History is messy, separate it with paragraphs.

because my summoning with hounds. ive studied with them

D. O. N. E. seriously that is everything so go erase all your pause's

You can't learn inuzuka secret (keyword SECRET) techniques just from BEING with dogs.

Kakashi had dogs summoned for tracking and offense/defense purposes. He can have them when he reaches Jounin level.

Kakashi had dogs that could track and bite, not use Inuzuka clan tech's. Remove them.

Now your good.