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Post by manu Wed Oct 22, 2008 1:25 pm

Basic Character Information:
Name: Manu Nara
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Clan: Nara

Looks: (pic below) Manu is a long and slender young man. He has his black hair hanging lose enough to hang a bit in front of his eyes but not too long either. He has black eyes and most of the time he is seen smoking. Most of the time he always wears a black suit whit a white shirt underneath it and mostly a black tie whit fitting but still comfortable (for his fighting style) black pants. Over it he wears a open leaf flack jacket just for the additional pockets to put things away. He always wears special black leather boots. Not only do they look stylish they are also extremely reinforced to increase the effectiveness of his fighting style. He wears his forehead protector attached to his belt and at the sides of his belt he has strapped two trench knifes. He usually wears this because he likes the neat look it gives him.
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Personality: Even tough he can get easily bored or annoyed Manu is a kind guy who cares a lot of people close to him and will never accept that any harm would be done to them. But he is also a hothead as he tends to get quickly angered when taunted. But he always manages to keep thinking strategic like most Nara members can do and he tends to laugh a lot too when in the mood. He has a strong will that helped him in numerous occasions and he is especially know for that by his family since he never gives in to something after he set his mind to it. The only one who can get him so far is his sis.

Skill and Rank Information
Village: Hidden leaf
Rank: chunnin

Special Characteristics: High strength in legs.
Special Effects: Because of his constant training of his legs and his feet for his fighting style that mostly revolves around these he gained a lot of strength in these. This makes him especially faster on his feet and more agile then normal people. He also can jump higher then most people. In terms of strength depending how he kicks he can relocate bones of his enemy's or even break solid rocks whit his kicks.

Elements: Fire and Earth
Skills Specialties: Clan technique's/ninjutsu and Taijutsu

Equipment
cigarettes and his lighter
A few shuricken and a few kunai.
A whole bunch of explosive tags +/- 100
Smoke bombs 5
flash bombs 5
Summoning scroll (contains 10 steel balls)
His 2 trench knifes (they are made to channel and absorb the users chakra. Pic below)
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Jutsus
all basic academy jutsu's

Clan Jutsus

Name: Shadow Imitation Technique
Rank: D
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description:The Shadow Imitation Technique's original purpose is to delay pursuers in order for a team to flee. With the use of a hand seal, the user can stretch a shadow out. The length depends on how much chakra the user has and on how much shadow there is in the area. If a target is captured within the user's shadow, the result is that the two combatants will mirror each others' movements. Repeatedly using this technique exhaust the user a lot.

Name: Reverse shadow Imitation Technique
Rank: C
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: This is a technique based on the normal shadow imitation technique that Manu developed when he was still pretty young. Instead that the opponent has to do what the user does it is now reversed so that the user has to mimic every movement of the opponent. This is a good technique to learn something from somebody else and it is released on mental command of the user

Name: Shadow Neck Bind Technique
Rank: C
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: After capturing an opponent with the Shadow Imitation Technique, the user can then further extend their shadow up to the target's throat in the shape of a hand, which chokes them to death. Also if the user is at a last resort, and the shadow possession isn't making them copy their moves, he will bind the opponents body in order to stop all their movements and cause great amount of damage. In addition, the closer the user is to their opponent, the tighter the strangle will become. However, with an incredible amount of strength, the target can force the shadow hand off.

Name: Shadow Sewing
Rank: B
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: The Shadow Sewing technique is a technique unique to the Nara Clan. The user first extends his shadow by using the Rat hand seal, then creates shadow tendrils by using the Bird hand seal. The tendrils can serve various purposes such as attacking or binding an opponent and/or attacking multiple targets.

Name: Shadow Summoning Technique
Rank: B
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: A technique that Manu uses as finishing move. After capturing a target with the Shadow Imitation Technique, the user summons shadowy tendrils from their opponent's body, controlling them in the same manner as Shadow Sewing, but from the opponent's body instead of the user's. Manu usually uses this to gather up exploding tags he threw into the air before using this to stick them to the opponent and activate them. The fawn will crash into the enemy to deal a heavy physical blow

Name: Shadow serpent
Rank: C
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: A technique that Manu developed after becoming Chunnin. After stretching out his shadow like whit shadow sewing he creates one Snake like shadow tentacle that heads for the enemy. If it reaches the enemy it wraps around it and finally bites in their throat to hold them (The bite feels like somebody grabbing their throat). Once it gets a good hold on them it starts to try and crush the enemy by keeping putting pressure on it. An alternative way of using this is while fighting on water the user uses the serpent to pull the enemy underwater and squishes the air out of them to drown them.

Name: Shadow Fawn - Prancing blow
Rank: C
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: This is a technique Manu developed after he became chuunin in preparation for the Shadow Buck - Piercing Blow technique. This jutsu is performed after the target has already been bound by the Shadow Imitation Jutsu. After forming the necesary hand seals a fawn reises up out of the shadow at Manu's end and charges towards the enemy. This also allows the user to strike their opponent without closing their distance, or even revealing their location if they managed to bind their shadows from a stealthy location. After the fawn strikes, the Shadow Imitation is released and cannot immediately be reattached until the shadow has shrunk back to its natural size.

Name: Shadow Buck - Piercing Blow
Rank: B
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: A technique that Manu developed when he was a chunnin. This jutsu is performed after the target has already been bound by the Shadow Imitation Jutsu. Once bound, the user performs the necessary hand seals and a creates a shadow-form full-grown buck that rises up from the shadow at the user's end and physically crashes itself into the target with a heavy physical blow, piercing the target's flesh with its antlers. The wounds created are comparable to being stabbed with two kunai. This also allows the user to strike their opponent without closing their distance, or even revealing their location if they managed to bind their shadows from a stealthy location. After the buck strikes, the Shadow Imitation is released and cannot immediately be reattached until the shadow has shrunk back to its natural size.

Name: Shadow Imitation Shuriken
Rank: C
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: A technique that was discovered by a Nara clan member a long time ago. By charging their chakra in a chakra sensitive weapon a clan member can use it to temporarily pin down a opponent by hitting their shadow whit it. This lasts until the chakra has disperced out of the weapon or until the weapon is removed. Manu uses his trench knives for this technique.

Name: Shadow Sword
Rank: B
Element: Nara clan shadow
Description: A technique Manu invented in combination whit one trench knife. Manu charges his shadow manipulating chakra in one of his trench knifes and then add his own shadow to it. This will cause a blade made of shadow to grown from the knife turning it in a sword. This uses Manu's shadow so he won't be able to use any other clan technique's while maintaining this. He can let the shadow blade shrink and stretch at will.


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Post by manu Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:10 am

Elemental Jutsus

Name: Fireball
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: A basic fire technique. By gathering fire chakra in his lungs he can breath it out in a constant stream of fire at his enemy.

Name: Running fire
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: After forming some hand seals streams of fire erupt from the ground and race towards the opponent. When it reaches them it swirls around them trapping them in a circle of flames.

Name: Fire rain
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: The user jumps up and releases several small fireballs that come crashing downwards on the opponent.

Name: Meteor crash
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: The user creates a large fireball by exhaling fire that is strong enough to Cray a opponent away if it hits him. After traveling a bit the fireball gets unstable and explodes in a inferno of fire.

Name: Mist Covering Technique
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air via mouth,and utilizing a large amount of chakra to turn it in a dense mist that when is close to fire it is making very big and destructible fire that covers a large area.

Name: Fire wall
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: Manu throws his lighter on the ground forming some hand signs. After finishing a wall of flames will erupt from it. He can use it to separate him from his enemy or create additional light to lengthen his shadow.

Name: Fire clones
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: The user creatues a solid clone out of fire. Whenever the clone recieves a hard or lethal blow they poof and turn back into fire. If the enemy poofs them by a physical blow or at close range they can get burned by the fire released out of the clones.

Name: Ash Product Burning
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: This is a technique that spews superheated ash from the user's mouth. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

Name: Fire Dragon Flame Missile
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: This technique exhales a long stream of incredibly hot fire from the user's mouth like that of a flamethrower. Manu is able to use this technique with such an intensity that the flames become white.

Name: Burst flame
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: After forming several handseals the Manu stomps the ground whit his feet creating a crack in the ground. He breaths a huge amount of fire inside of it where it starts to travel underground. When they reach the enemy the flames are compressed together making the ground burst open emitting a huge flame from underneath.

Name: Hidden Among Rocks
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: A technique used by earth users. By using it they become invisible to the normal eye and can move trough rocks. It can be used to travel trough rocky area's, flee or to avoid earth attacks. People whit some special doijutsu can still see the user.

Name: Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: After forming some hand seals the ground the enemy stands on changes into moving river of mud to knock them of balance or set up for another attack.

Name: Rising Stone Spears
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: After a few hand seals large Sharp stone spikes will erupt out of the ground whit whit as goal to pierce incoming enemy's.

Name: Rock Staff
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: After using a few hand seals the ground cracks open and gathers stones into the crack in a long thin sharp spear. This is then launched at the opponent whit pin pointed accuracy.

Name: Boulder bombardment
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: After a few hand seals there is a loud crack and out of the ground a large boulder is launched. Manu can then kick the boulder at the enemy whit his immense strength in his legs. He can let the boulder crash down on the enemy like that or shatter it whit a aditional hand seal at the last moment to make sharp shards of rock to rain down on a wider area.

Name: Rock pillar prison
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: After forming several hand seals rock pillars will erupt out of the ground to create a prison like structure around the enemy. The rocks are much stronger then normal rocks so they require more effort to break them.

Name: Mud clone
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: The user creates a solid clone out of mud from himself. If the clone gets damaged the clone turns back into mud. The user can use this to switch places whit it. This allows the user to hide underground to set up a counter attack while the clone takes the blow.

Name: Bedrock Coffin
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: After forming some hand seals rocks appear out of the ground at every side of the opponent forming 2 huge sections. They are then slammed together to try and crush the opponent between them.

Name: Earth Dragon Bullet
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: This can be used after using the earth flow river. Out of the river of mud a dragon head will rise that fires bullets of compressed mud out of his mouth at a rapid speed. These bullets have power enough to break trough wood and damage rocks. The user can use a fire attack to light the bullets to add to the lethality.

Name: Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: After forming a long string of hand seals Manu will stomp his feet into the ground creating a huge crack. The ground cracks open and from it rises a huge stone wall to act as a shield to block incoming attacks or as a support to create additional shadow.

Taijutsu

Name: Red leg style
Rank: C
Element: None
Description: This fighting style is been reached to Manu by the old cook Zanro who invented it and it gets his name from the fact that at the end of the fight the users leg is red from the enemy's blood. The main principle of it is to not use the hands in battle except for hand signs or handstands. The raw power of the legs and feet of the user are so high that they are capable of shattering rocks and relocating bones of the enemy. The most common stance of it is that the user keeps his hands in his pockets and taps whit the tip of his shoe on the ground waiting for the enemy to come at him. Manu is now the only living master of it and improved it by combining it from time to time whit fighting whit trench knifes that still allow him to use the fighting style freely. Most of the attacks name just the place that they are about to kick.

Name: Throat
Rank: D
Element: none
Description: A kick whit his knee aimed at the throat of the enemy. If it hits the enemy is slammed backwards head first against the ground. It also makes it difficult for the enemy to breath well.

Name: Neck
Rank: D
Element: none
Description: The user runs towards the enemy and at the last moment he spins around brining his leg up to hit the enemy in the neck. An alternate version is jumping up to preform a kick at the back of the opponents neck.

Name: Shoulder
Rank: D
Element: none
Description: The user raises his leg above his head and brings it down hard on the shoulder of the enemy to knock them of balance or slam them deeper in the ground if they are already down.

Name: Ribs
Rank: D
Element: none
Description: The user drops down on a one handed hand stand and spins around before kicking the enemy in the ribs. This will flip them up in the air spinning around and is usualey followed up by Lower back.

Name: Lower Back
Rank: D
Element: none
Description: This is usually used after Ribs. When the enemy spinning in the air the user still in his one handed hand stand spins around in the opposite direction and kicks upwards in the enemy's back sending them flying upwards.

Name: Chest
Rank: D
Element: none
Description: A stabbing kick straight in the opponents chest after the user raised his knee in preparation. A alternative way is when leaning back the user kicks a bit upwards to send the enemy flying up a bit.

Name: Stomach
Rank: D
Element: none
Description: A strong sidewards kick aimed at the stomach of the enemy that is effective because of the delicate place they aimed for. This mostly sends the enemy flying backwards if it hits.

Name: Hands
Rank: D
Element: none
Description: A move made for disarming a opponent. After rushing up to them the user dodges any possible attacks and then kicks at the opponent's hand to kick a weapon out of them.

Name: Chin
Rank: C
Element: none
Description: A upwards kick aimed at the opponents chin that sends them flying up a bit. A stronger alternative version of it is to wait until the enemy attacks physically and then the user lets himself fall back, land on his hands and kicks against the opponent his chin whit his two feet at the same time. This makes the opponent fly upwards higher then whit one leg.

Name: Open face slam
Rank: C
Element: none
Description: A counter attack. After being able to avoid a enemy's attack the user hooks his feet behind the enemy's neck and slams him against the ground face first.

Name: Double feet kick
Rank: C
Element: none
Description: The enemy preforms a running jump towards the enemy and kicks both his feet into the enemy's stomach for a powerful blow.

Name: Dual shoulder
Rank: C
Element: none
Description: This is most effective if the enemy is trapped or can't move. The user jumps up and flips around in the air before coming down and slamming his both legs down on the opponents shoulders. This can dislocate their shoulders or break bones.

Name: Skull slam
Rank: C
Element: none
Description: This is most effective if the enemy is trapped or can't move. The user jumps up in the air and starts flipping around while holding out one leg. When he comes down he slams his heel against the head of the enemy. This results in a extreme heavy blow.

Name: Rapid spin
Rank: C
Element: none
Description: The user jumps up and lands in a handstand whit his legs pointed straight upwards. He starts to spin around rapidly to gain speed and power and then opens his legs kicking around. This is mostly used when surrounded by multiple enemy's to kick them all away or to kick one opponent hard several times.

Name: Face barrage
Rank: C
Element: none
Description: A barrage of kicks against the enemy's face. the attacks are aimed at their eyes , nose, cheek , teeth and mouth. This attack can damage the bone structure in the enemy's face and even relocate those bones. This can only be done if the enemy is very close by.

Name: Drill leg
Rank: B
Element: none
Description: A strong attack where the user has to be above the enemy first. The user aims his main leg at the enemy and bends his second leg placing his foot on the knee of his main leg. He then rapidly spins around gaining speed before coming drilling down. This is strong enough to crash trough rocks while coming down.

Name: Air force power shot
Rank: B
Element: none
Description: Using the high strenght in his legs the user can kick a object at high speed towards the enemy. He usually does this whit rocks he creates whit his earth technique's or whit the metal ball's that he keeps in his summoning scroll. He can also launch a ally towards his enemy by letting them balance on his leg before he kicks.

Name: Power leg shot.
Rank: B
Element: none
Description: A strong single kick attack and mostly the finisher move of Manu. He can will also try this when he is extremely pissed of to do a one hit KO whit it. The user will rush forward as fast as he can and at the last moment he jumps up while keeping forward and spins around. He gathers all his strenght in his one leg and kicks at full power the enemy in the chest or the face (depending on the situation). The incredible impact will also launch the enemy away, blasting them trough any object they come across in their path of flight.

Name: Red leg hidden technique - Devil leg
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Description: The hidden technique of the red leg style and the signature technique of Red leg masters. The user starts to spin around charging fire chakra in his leg. When he stops the spinning the chakra and the friction has turned one leg bright red and extremely hot. The speed and the attack power of the user is greatly increased while doing this and he can cause third degree burns when he hits somebody whit it. When swinging the leg it flares up in bright white light that also can blind a opponent so its harder to dodge incoming attacks. This technique can only be ended when the user ends it or by hitting the user whit a high level water attack. This enhances every normal kicking attack of Manu whit high fire power.


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Post by manu Tue Oct 28, 2008 7:22 am

History and RP Sample
History:
Manu is born and raised in a simple family of the Nara clan and his parents soon found out that he was a typical Nara guy. Brilliant whit a high IQ but always complaining and not a bit motivated. This changed a bit after the birth of his sister where he always took care of while his dad wasn't busy teaching him their clan technique's. Because of this he managed to enter the ninja academy at a relative young age.

Although it was easily seen that he was a guy whit a lot of talent his stubborn attitude became a problem. He refused to use his hands in hand to hand combat. He had the idea that a shinobi his hands are their most valuable possession that they have and should only be used for hand signs and nothing else. Whatever the teachers or his parents refused he bluntly refused to cooperate whit them when it involved that. Dispites of this his strategic thinking level where extremely high and he managed to graduate from the academy while even helping his sister from time to time.

As a genin he hadn't had a easy life. His teammates always teased him for his dislike in using his hands and his sensei was always angry and annoyed at him for not obeying. But eventually events turned when he and his team members went to eat in a small restaurant. They where constantly breaking down the food, refused to pay and eventually wanted to trash up the place. Manu didn't wanted to interfere in all of this when suddenly the old cook of the restaurant kicked his team members out by using a strange fighting style. Curiously he approached the man apologizing for his teammates and asked about the fighting style. The red leg style was invented by Zanro (the cook) and only uses the legs and the feet since cooks also cherish their hands. Instantly Manu asked him to teach it too him but first the old man wasn't interesting. But when Manu set his mind on something he doesn't stops until he got it so they made a deal. Manu would come help the old man whit some chores and he would train Manu in the Red leg fighting style.

Manu got easily annoyed while doing those stupid jobs and because he found that his fighting style didn't advanced as quick as he planned so he had to think up something. Whit the help of his sis who started at the ninja academy herself he created the reverse shadow imitation technique. Whit this at his disposal the trainings whit the old man got better and in no time he got the hang of the basics. This resulted in a great surprise at the last round of the chuunin exams as nobody had ever seen him fight physically. To every body's surprise he managed to combine his tactical inside, clan jutsu and his taijutsu in such a way that he always came out victorious and in the end he earned himself the title of chuunin.

After the exam he became more busy as his training whit the old man intensified, he got much more missions and he had to sometimes lead a team himself. During his spare free time he had left he was working at the small restaurant of the old man. He really started to get fond of his mentor even tough he never really showed it. Because his rapid improvement he quickly became skilled eneugh for a improvement too chunin but since he found it too much of a drag he let it go by for now to get his promotion later.

He took a littel break in his work to help his sister to get ready for her chuunin exam in the same way as she always had supported him. At that time he too had become a master of the red leg fighting style and mastered both his elements and his clan's hidden technique's to a high level. During the chuunin exam the old man came to visit him and for the first in all those years he told him how proud he was that Manu was his student ... but that he had 1 more request.

The doctors told him that he only had a few more years to live and his final wish was to see the 5 great country's of the world and he wanted his student to be whit him the last years of his life. Manu couldn't impossibly refuse so he left before being able to see the end of the exam. After saying goodbye he left the village at the age of 18 together whit his mentor on their journey.

For 3 years they traveled together trough the lands visiting all the country's they came across. Finaley they reached the birth town of the old man near the hidden cloud village. He had no family left so Manu stayed whit him to the end as that man had become a second father for him. And a few days later the man passed away in peace in the present of his one and only student. Before he died he told Manu that he shouldn't be afraid to use his hands in combat when it came on to it since a good shinobi must be willing to sacrofice anything for theire village and the people they love. As a dying wish he asked Manu to get over it so that he would become even better then he ever was.

Then exactly 4 years later after he left the village Manu returned to it as the only master of the red leg technique left in the world. His journey has taught him allot and changed his life for good and what he heard when he came back would do that even further. During a mission a few years ago his sis got kidnapped. Enraged by hearing that in the mean time they failed to get her back he set out to find her himself.

After researching everything he eventually found his sis being trained into a killer by some guys in a base close to the border of the fire country. After planning everything out carefully he managed to get into the place and trashes it up. In the end he even managed to kill the leader of that group in battle and finally freed his sister after all those years.

Now they have went together back to the village where his sis finally became a fulfledged chuunin now. Now he is back and fully dedicating himself in keeping his village, family and people he cares about safe so that things like this never would happen again. And he even picked up the advice of his mentor to use his hands again as he now uses a set of trench knifes in combination whit the Red leg fighting style to make the old man proud of him.

Rp Sample:
The evening was falling as Manu looked trough the forest at a lonely building. His sis had been kidnapped a few years ago and there they where training her in some kind of personal weapon. He lighted a cigarette to calm himself but the only things he felt where anger and rage. He noticed that one guy was standing on guard duty and Manu walked out of his hiding space towards the guy. He looked up as the stranger neared him "Hey you ... this is private property, get the hell out of here." Grumpy he placed his hand on the handle of his sword but manu said only one thing. "Power leg shot."

Inside the thugs the leader of the place hired where gambling among each other whit the money they just earned until suddenly the front door shattered and one of their members flew trough the room crashing into the wall. Quickly they get up grabbing their weapons and looking at the open door where now only Manu stood. He grinned as that relieved him a bit from his anger. "Now ... lets get this party started shall we." Enraged the thuggs got up and stormed at him but at the same time he leaped forwards landing on both his hands "Rapid twister". He started to spin around on his hands and started kicking around. The thugs who weren't that smart stormed him and got hit as soon as they got to close. They where sent flying and landed unconscious across the room. The last few got scared so he had to get up to swiftly deal whit them whit a few kick.

A door leading to deeper in the building opened and a large man came out dressed in a heavy armor and wielding two swords. The big man smirked at Manu. "Well well ... a Nara seems like somebody finally wants her back after all ... But sadly for you i am her new family now." Manu tried to keep himself calm as he blew out some smoke before tossing his cigarette away. There was a intense silence as the two guys looked at each other before they charged at each other and started their fight whit Manu's sis at stake.

Soon a hectic battle broke lose where both party's got hit badly. The leader had wires attached to his weapon's to prevent him from losing them but blood dripped out his mouth and his armor was dented in on several places digging into his flesh and crushing bones. Manu panted as his suit was ripped revealing several cuts from where he got hit by the swords. This guy wasn't a pushover as he was also the one training his sister. The guy grinned at him raising his swords "Well i guess this is it ... seems like both of us won't be able to hold out much longer". Manu nodded "indeed and that's why we will finish this for once and for all now.". He started to spin around where he stood channeling his fire chakra to his leg. When he stopped spinning his leg was bright red and he raised his knee getting ready. "Red leg hidden technique - Devil leg. Now lets end this."

Both guys jumped forwards but before he could raise his swords probably he hissed in agony as Manu's leg flared up bright white when he swung it towards him. unable to dodge it in time he got hit right on his chin and was launched upwards trough the roof as the smell of burning flesh spread around. Manu jumped after him and closed in while he started to spin around gathering all the heat of his leg in his feet. Whit a loud scream he brought his feet down slamming it into the man's neck who let out a terrified scream. Whit all his strength he launched him downwards in a huge orb of fire having him slam trough the roof again and crash into the ground.

Manu lands down breathing heavily as his leg slowly stops to glow and cools down again. The impact of the man had created a crater in the ground and as manu looked down he noticed the man laying dead in a room below the floor. Suddenly he heard a noise coming from it and a figure stepped into the light looking up at him surprised. Even after all these years and after everything what happened the two recognized each other and Manu smiled holding out his hand. "Come sis ... its time to go home."


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Post by Whiddershiner Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:05 pm

wtf ds? it was never posted that jounin aren't allowed anymore, how come you didnt post anywhere, me and manu took days to create our two chars to be fitting each other. Now i will have to edit my char too so please, unapprove me. Also please do put up an announcement or something...
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Post by Yun Disukai Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:45 pm

Sorry mate, got the short end of the stick there.
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Post by manu Fri Oct 31, 2008 11:30 am

Readjusted to the lever of chuunin. I hope that i can keep that one A rank technique tough since its the signature technique of my fighting style.
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Post by Whiddershiner Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:00 pm

... would somebody please approve manu so finally we could have some fun together?... seems like this forum is already dieing...
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Post by Yun Disukai Mon Nov 10, 2008 11:57 am

Approveded.
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