Phain -akatsuki- -(APPROVED)- J

Name: Phain Nara
Age: 20
Gender:Male
Clan:Nara

Looks: My avatar

Personality:A naturally calm person who makes no assumptions until after he has learned everything though he is sometimes suspicious. At first he would seem trusting but he only trusts you with basic information until he learns that you are worthy of his trust. Reacts to all situations calmly even facing death or doom. He is nearly impossible to anger but once angered does not stop until someone has been slain.

Clan description:This clan from Konoha Village is known for its ability to manipulate their shadow. Utilizing this ability the clan member can attach their shadow to the shadow of another individual, and then take control of the user. Resulting in the affected person replicating or "shadowing" the exact movements in mirror form of the clan member.
Kekkei Gekkei: Shadow maipulation
Description:This clan from Konoha Village is known for its ability to manipulate their shadow. Utilizing this ability the clan member can attach their shadow to the shadow of another individual, and then take control of the user. Resulting in the affected person replicating or "shadowing" the exact movements in mirror form of the clan member.
Special Effect:Utilizing this ability the clan member can attach their shadow to the shadow of another individual, and then take control of the user. Resulting in the affected person replicating or "shadowing" the exact movements in mirror form of the clan member.

Village:Leaf None
Rank:Akatsuki

Special Characteristics:None
Special Effects:None

Elements: Water,Earth,shadow?
Skills Specialties: Ninjutsu,Genjutsu,Taijutsu




History:
Pre student Arc at a young age Phain did not know his parents. At age 5 he discovered he was a Nara but that did not help his quest to find his parents. At 6 he learned how to use his Nara clan ability to some extent enough to use it on small animals and people but the people were harder to catch with the jutsu. at 7 Phain witnessed the murder of his closest friend by the hand of a missing ninja who had been hiding out and thought his friend had figured him out.
Academy Arc At 9 Phain joined the ninja academy this was a joyous occasion for him seeing as he was young for usual academy starting age. At 10 Phain began to take more control of his jutsu and develop tactics around it as well as. he started to make tactical plans in battles and enjoyed games of planning and tactics. He advanced quickly in the stadnings among his classmates and was noticed at once by his teachers that he was a tactical child. They advanced him and tested him until he graduated.
Genin Arc At 12 Phain graduated the ninja academy and went to a squad. HIs squad completed about 50 D rank missions and 30 C rank missions in 6 months then the chunin exams came. The first exams he passed with ease he successfully did enough on the tests and did not have to cheat to pass that exam. The second exam was harder for him because he had to rely almost entirely on his team as they relied on him. He carried the scroll and they followed him they waited at the tower and he set up a few traps and managed to get a scroll. He won his battles at the 3rd exam with no prelimanary.
Chunin Arc Phain passed but was the only of his squad to become a chunin. He was sad about being the only one who passed in his squad for his squadmates were his friends but he quickly moved on. At age 13 he took on his first mission as a chunin and successfully stole plans from the hidden sand village to discover if an attack was planned on the leaf village. During this year Phain completed over 100 missions each done with absolute perfection and with only 1 death under his command and only 1 mission failure. This mission was an A rank mission meant as a test to the most promising chunin at the time. They were told that it was a common C rank mission for diplomacy in the land of snow. When they arrived there real mission became clear as a band of assassins attacked and killed one of the team. Phain as acting commander took command of the mission and decided they should finish. He made an attack on the assassins and raided them several times. They chased the band into a trap and were killed. Phain then returned to the leaf and reported the news of there teammates death which ushered sadness over the village. At age 15 Phain defeated 2 leaf jonin at once with ease and began to think the leaf village was underneath him as far as advancment and placment.
Jounin arc At 16 Phain became a Jounin and completed 275 B and A rank missions that year with only 2 failures and 3 deaths. At age 17 He became anbu and did many solo missions for infultration and spying as well as more than 1 assassination. At age 18 Phain saw an akatsuki member and fought him to save his village. Though the battle was lost the akatsuki member told him that Phain was a powerful opponet and asked him to assist the akatsuki. Phain after realizing that he was not truly being appreciated in his village decided later to take the akatsuki member up on his offer.
Post Jounin Arc He lost the battle and the akatsuki did not kill him but instead took him out of the village and trained him in the arts of earth style for Phain already knew water. Phain was given the task of killing his previous sensei. Phain then joined up with the akatsuki as an aid for some missions at the age of 19 then after becoming 20 joined the akatsuki. He was asked to prove himself by killing his legendary sensei. The two had a duel for a long time and this duel was marked down in the books. Finally Phain prevailed and killed his sensei along with some anbu who attacked him after the battle had ended and attempted to "detain" him. He then left his village for the akatsuki
Rp Sample:
Phain walked down the villages road slowly after he had just been branded a traitor to the village and slain 10 ninja who tried to kill him. HIs chakra was slightly depleted but it still needed a little rest to get back to full strength. "I will soon be part of the akatsuki" Phain thought as he continued to walk "then I will become the leader..." Phain trailed off thinking about his plans for the future as he walked towards the akatsuki base and out of the village. "I am your enemy" He spoke at the air and emptiness in front of him but reffered to the village behind him. Phain chuckled to himself as he remember his sensei's face as he attacked him...the same face as when he first met his sensei. Phain was surprised that his face was the same as when he met him full of pride and a sense of fulfilment to himself and others. After he had been walking for a while he reached a crosspath. Phain regarded all sides of the path one to the akatsuki one to his old village one to the mountains and one to the forest. They represented his life and where he could go from there. He thought for a moment and sat down. "this is my life but I have a path to follow" Phain said after he had thought on it for a long time. Phain continued to walk towards the akatsuki and did not look back to the crossroads. He needed to be an akatsuki member it was his destiny and he could not just simply go against his destiny even if it was his wish. His internal conflict ended there but the face of his sensei would not leave his mind when he closed his eyes. "im losing myself" Phain thought as he kept walking down the path after his pace had become more brisk he needed to get to the other end of road so it would keep him from going back on his path in life and his purpose. The AKATSUKI

OK I finished my app finally

You need more history, not to mention a better RP sample. :3~

Akatsuki is high ranking Missing ninja. I think a strong RPer should be in control of those characters. Please show off your skill. o-o

ok I can do that

Spell check the whole app, hun! ;D add at least 2 paragraphs of personality, find the correct Clan Description on Leafninja.com, since you have no avatar please provide a look description, and use paragraph form so it looks better. :3 History must be in Arcs.

Alsos, you might want to make your age older. :3

Just helpful tips. ;D

thanks for the tips i really appreciate it
if you dont mind is this better?

- To be an S ranked MN, your character must be at least 20 years of age.

- Again, The Neo Akatsuki are suppose to be some of the most elite shinobi. I would recommend added at least, I'd say 2 S-Ranked jutsu. At the point your character is at, I don't think he is Akatsuki potiental.

- I would request your Arcs have more detail in all of them.

- Alot more detail in personality.

Just overall, make this character better and more detailed if you wish to be a Neo Akatsuki member.

ok i will

it said my post was to big so here are my jutsu

Jutsus
Name:Substitution jutsu
Rank:E
Element:None
Description:using a small amount of chakra substitutes the users body with another object or thing near the user

Name:Transformation technique
Rank:E
Element:None
Description:this jutsu allows the user to transform into any object or person to fool opponets

Name:Shadow imitation
Rank:Clan
Element:None/Shadow
Descritpion:It's original purpose was as a skill to help delay any pursuers. After forming the needed hand seals, the clan member is able to manipulate their shadow along any surface. By using other nearby shadows they can further extend the reach of their shadow, however they are limited to the surface area of the original cast shadow. Once the clan members shadow reaches the target shadow, it will attach itself. While attached the target will be frozen, only able to replicate in mirror form the actions of the clan member. If the clan member is low on chakra, the Kage Mane will falter and the shadow will return to its normal form.

Name:Hidden mist jutsu
Rank:D
Element:Water
Descritpion:The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

Name:Combination transform technique
Rank:B
Element:None
Descritpion:technique that allows two ninja to transform themselves temporarily into another person or thing. While in the form, they can use the physical characteristics of the one they are impersonating.


Name:Water whip
Rank:C
Element:Water
Descritpion: technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The ninja can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing the ninja to whip the crap out of little kids.


Name:Violent water wave
Rank:C
Element:Water
Descritpion:After forming the needed handseals, Yahiko will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.


Name:False place technique
Rank:C
Element:None
Descritpion:a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

Name:sly mind affect
Rank:C
Element:None
Descritpion: a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

Name:hell viewing technique
Rank:D
Element:None
Descritpion:a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name:Shadow neck bind
Rank:Clan
Element:None/Shadow
Description:To perform the technique the clan member will first bind their target using the Kage Mane no Jutsu technique. Once the target can no longer move, they form the needed hand seal to initiate this technique. The clan member uses their shadow to form a hand which will creep up their opponents body to their neck. Once the hand reaches the neck, it will constrict in such a manner so as to strangle the opponent. However, the clan member will need to be careful. If their target has a lot of chakra, they can turn back the shadow hand and prevent it from binding their neck.


Name:Violent bubble wave
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:The user expells a huge wave of water from his/her mouth

Name:Five sharks Eating
Rank:B
Element:Water
Description:Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.


Name:Masouleum dumpling
Rank:B
Element:Earth
Description:After striking the ground with his hands, Jiroubou is able to overturn the earth into a large dumpling shape chunk of earth the size of a mausoleum. Using his immense strength, he can lift up the ball and hurl it at his opponent, flatening all in its path.

Name:Earth Spear
Rank:B
Element:Earth
Description:After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks

Name:Grand waterfall
Rank:A
Element:Water
Description:After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Name:Collision Waves
Rank:B
Element:Water
Description:After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Name:Five pronged seal
Rank:A
Element:None
Description:Orochimaru forms an elemental seal on each of his fingers, one for each of the following five "elements": water, metal, earth, fire and wood. He used this odd numbered seal to disrupt the affects of the even numbered Shishou Fuuin placed on Naruto's stomach by the Fourth Hokage. The Gogyou Fuuin would disrupt the Shishou Fuuin's ability to let the Kyuubi's chakra blend into Naruto's chakra.

Name:Five Pronged Seal release
Rank:A
Element:None
Description:Jiraiya forms an elemental unseal on each of his fingers, one for each of the follwoing five "elements": water, metal, earth, fire and wood. He then applies his hand with force to the Gogyou Fuuin to remove it.

Name:Shadow sewing
Rank:Clan
Element:None
Description:To perform the technique Shikamaru will first form the needed handseal to extend his shadow. Shikamaru will then change the handseal to cause the shadow to emerge from the ground in tendrils. The tendrils can extend and whip about and are strong enough to pierce nearby targets.

Name:Release
Rank:D
Element:None
Description:After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name:Mist servant
Rank:D
Element:Water
Description:Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Name:Tree binding death
Rank:B
Element:None
Description: After forming the needed hand seals, Kurenai will disappear and approach her target. Once near her target, a tree will grow at their feet and its branches will bind them so they can no longer move. Once the illusion makes them believe they are captured, Kurenai will appear from the tree itself and stab her target with a kunai.

Name:water surface walking
Rank:D
Element:Water
Description: the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name:water encampment wall
Rank:B
Element:Water
Description:The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.

Name:Water shark bomb
Rank:B
Element:Water
Description: The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Name:Burying Earth Cluster
Rank:S
Element:Earth
Description:causes the user to uplift the ground into a point where the target is standing then immediatly push the ground back down causing the target to be sucked into the ground where the earth soon collapses on causing an underground avalanche on there body which is at this point trapped underground several hundred meters

Name:Body sealing jutsu
Rank:S
Element:None
Description:this jutsu causes the opponet to have there chakra sealed off wherever this jutsu hits. This jutsu is a forbidden jutsu that causes a chakra form of the target to come out of the users chest and fly at the target. If the entire chakra body hits the target the target is killed

Name:shadow shuriken technique
Rank:A
Element:None
Description:a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown shuriken.

Name:Water prison
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Name:revolving earth spirit palm
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Description:This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.

Name:crescent moon dance
Rank:A
Element:None
Description:As the ninja charges at his opponent, he creates mutiple shadow copies to confuse his opponent. Using the confusion, the real ninja will attack from the opponent's blindside.

I should say this, even though im not a mod. Then a mod can post what I said and then delete my post XD.

Resurection of the impure world

I believe can only and should only be known by Orochimaru, the only way to know it is if he taught you. Since this site has a storyline, you would have to have a really good reason to have learned this jutsu or someone let you.

Also,

complete nin mystic dragon seal

Is only known by Pain and I believe Tobi/Madara. They do the jutsu and the other members help do it, the more the members the faster the jutsu is done. So removing that would make sense since only the Akatsuki leader and his co leader knows it.

hold on ill fix it tommorow

OK OK I finally fixed everything including those 2 S rank jutsu

Approved I suppose.